Like every normal day, I got changed, went to school, and played pokemon. Today was different when I started to play the game started glowing yellow and I saw a swirly vortex of color. Frightened I dropped it quickly. I couldn't resist the color of swirls tempted me to feel it, I felt my hand go in the vortex, and my room started to grow fuzzy. And I felt the vortex pulling me into the game, I tried to scream but I didn't feel to worried. *Bang* I could see nothing but black around me. I began to see colors to see I was on a bed. In a corner I saw Twinleaf Town, "Awww fu#$!" I screamed "stuck in the pokemon world great!" My mom was making pizza too, I remembered I hadn't eaten anything yet for dinner and my stomach was banging against my side. "BlaaG" I looked down to see my puke rolling around in the waste basket.
Chapter Two: Getting started
Spoiler
I rolled over on my back the vortex gave me extreme motion sickness, I needed food before I faint. I slowly walked down the stairs, there was a woman apparently tossing a few sausages with some corn cobs in a pot on the stove. She didn't notice I was there some I moaned, "Please help me, I'm starving, and I feel like I am going to faint." She turned around and said, "Aww, honey you're finally awake, you slept through breakfast and lunch. I was starting to worry about you."
"Wait I'm not related to you why are you calling me honey?"
"Um... David you are my son! Why are you acting crazy?"
"I'm from the real world, I was sucked into this game!"
"ENOUGH honey, eat your corn and sausages, Dawn wants you to meet her at her house."
Confused I began to eat my food. When I finished the woman/"mom" shoved me out the door. Remembering what "mom" said I went to the house that had 'Dawn's house' on the mailbox. Soon after I knocked a girl my age opened the door. She said, "Oh my god David, you actually came." She grabbed my hand and dragged me into the house and into her room. She panted, "David guess what... Prof. Oak said he is going to let us choose a pokemon for us to keep, our all time dreams."
I replied, "Okay then, lets go then."
Prof. Oaks's lab was right next to Dawn's house, when we went in we saw prof. oak preparing three pokeballs on a table. When he saw us he stepped for to shake our hands.
He began to say, "Hello good children, today you may choose one of these three starters: Bulbasaur, Squirtle, or Charmander. Which will you choose?"
"David you can choose your starter first." said Dawn.
I said, "I choose..... Squirtle"
"Okay, I'll choose Bulbasaur than."
Prof. Oak handed us our pokemon, I was about to leave but Prof. Oak held me back and said, "Not so fast I need to tell you how to use your pokemon, and I have some more stuff to give you. Pokemon should always be use for good and never evil some people know for using them for evil is the evil Team Rocket. You should love your pokemon and it will love you back. Also, I have a mission for you two."
Prof. Oak pulled out two red little machines.
"These are pokedexs, you will use them to collect data on wild pokemon once you filled them completely I'll update it so you can find pokemon from other regions. Also, here I give you five pokeballs for catching pokemon, you catch one by lower its HP and throwing it at the pokemon hopefully it will wriggle three times then you have caught it."
Dawn said, "Okay prof. oak, thanks for the pokemon. Hey David lets test these pokemon out!"
Chapter 3: Your first Battle
Dawn has challenged you to a battle!
David: Go Squirtle
Dawn: Go Bulbasaur
David: Squirtle use pound
It is not very effective
Dawn: Bulbasaur use leer
Squirtle's defense was lowered
David: Squirtle use growl
Bulbasaur's attack was lowered
Dawn: Bulbasaur use tackle
It was not very effective
David: Squirtle use pound
It was a Critical Hit
Bulbasaur fainted
David gets ¢572
Squirtle gains 100 experience points
Squirtle growing to level 6
"Wow David you're good." said Dawn
I replied, "Thanks Prof. Oak for the pokemon and thanks Dawn for the battle."
Prof Oak said, "Have a nice day kids bye."
Chapter 4: Off to the first gym! Part 1 of 3
As Dawn and I left the shop, we stopped in the center of town.
"David, we need to get packed for our adventure. Lets pack our things so we can head towards the first gym so we can get the badge. Meet me here in half in hour." said Dawn
"Okay Dawn." I replied.
We both headed towards our house to pack our things. As I walked in, I saw my mom crying on the sofa.
I approached and said,"Mom, what is wrong?"
She said, "Prof. Oak called me and said you and dawn are now pokemon trainers and will be getting set for adventure."
"Oh yeah, ummm. Sorry? Me and Dawn are leaving half an hour so I need to pack."
"*Sniffle* Okay honey?"
I headed up stairs to my room grabbed my back pack and started packing. "First of course clean clothes. Next, ummm, I would say tent. Then, for sure cooking pan, lighter, first aid, sleeping bag/blankets, wallet, tooth brush/tooth paste, and pokemon stuff. That should be everything if I forgot something Dawn probably would let me use some of her whatever I might have forgotten." As I walk down the stairs with my backpack, my "mom" ran over to me and gave me some running shoes and a town map. "Thanks mom" I said. And I walked out the door. As I walked to the center of town, my mom waved back at me. I smiled and walk towards Dawn who was already there.
"Come on David lets go!" said Dawn.
As we walk towards to edge of town, we passed by a sign that said "Route 201, beware there are wild pokemon in the tall grass". While we were walking through some tall grass, I tripped and I felt to pecks on my legs.
"Dawn lets bring out our pokemon, two pokemon just attacked me."
"Okay David lets do this."
We brought out our pokedex and scanned the pokemon.
Pokemon Battle: Dawn and David vs. Pidgey and Pidgey
Pokedex: Pidgey and common bird pokemon found on most routes.
Dawn: Go Bulbasaur
David: Go Squirtle
Pidgey: Caww
Pidgey: Cawua
Dawn: Bulbasaur use tackle against Pidgey 1.
It was not very effective.
David: Squirtle use pound against Pidgey 1.
Critical Hit! It was not very effective.
Dawn: David lets catch both of them for each other. Dawn uses a pokeball.
*One shake, two shakes, three shakes* Dawn caught pidgey.
Pidgey 2 fled.
"David, I'm sorry yours ran away." said Dawn.
"Hey Dawn lets meet up at the next route sign. Then, we can catch our own pokemon and train them a bit." I said.
"Okay but don't take to long."
"I'll be there before dusk."
Dawn started walking ahead of me, while I tried to find another pidgey. After a couple minutes, I found one.
Pokemon Battle: David vs. Pidgey lvl. 4
David: Squirtle use pound
It was effective
Pidgey use Peck
It was effective
David throws Pokeball
*One shake, Two shakes,* You almost caught pidgey
Pidgey use Peck
It was not that effective
David throws pokeball
*One shake, two shakes, three shakes* Pidgey was caught.
I shouted yes in victory and headed up to the next route sign while leveling up my pokemon, when I met Dawn at the route sign my squirtle was lvl. 8 and my pidgey was lvl. 6.
"Okay David lets set our tents here. Under this tree in case it rains we'll be covered." said Dawn.
"I agree" I said.
As I set my tent up, I realized I forgot to bring food. My stomach was growling and I had no food, looking around I saw a couple berry bushes under another tree, quickly I ran over to the bushes and stuffed a handful in my mouth. I quickly spit them out they were extremely sour on the outside, however it would have to do. After my tent was complete, I told Dawn good night, and went to sleep in my sleeping bag.
Chapter 4: Off to the first gym! Part 2 of 3
When I woke up the next day, I smelled the berries from yesterday. As I headed out my tent, I saw Dawn eating some of the berries but they were smell sweeter than they tasted, next to her was the peel of the berries. I sat down next to her and began to eat some of her berries. They were just sweet and it wasn't sour. I packed up after I had my fill and there was just this route before we reached rockburg city where the first gym would be. As me and Dawn walked on, we decided to stay together since this route wouldn't be too far.
"David you know what, when I woke up I found a repel that will get us to rockburg city without meeting any pokemon!" said Dawn.
"Great! Lets run, I should heal my pokemon at the pokemon center." I said.
We could already see the sky scrapers in the city, which only caused us to go faster. When we finally reached the city, we found a comfortable hotel for us to stay in for a couple days. The hotel would provide food and drink, and it only cost us ¢1000. I told Dawn, I was going to explore the city. As I walked out something hit me "OUCH", a man not much taller than me said,"Sorry, I didn't see you there. Hey anyways you don't look like anyone from the game. Where are my manners, my name is Gary it is a pleasure to meet you." and he reached out to shake my hand, "I'm from the real world too, and the way to get out is apparently to beat the game. I'll be seeing you around, bye." And the man dashed off.
The young man reminded me, of being sucked in the game by that vortex it gave me a shiver. I went on to the pokemon center, when I gave the lady my pokeballs she said,"Thank you, it will be an hour before your pokemon heal so feel welcome to sit down and read our books.
I'm going to change this to a word doc. so I can add more words. Oh well, I'll find some way guys.
Why would you curse in a pokemon story? There are better ways to express your mind than through ignorance.
Also on the plus side, seems like a good story idea. I don't know why you would post a thread about it so soon when all you have is a paragraph.
You're right. If you must curse, for the character's aspect do it sparingly. Such as I did with Lt. Surge in my fan fic (he's a soldier come on people). But there are better ways to express your mind. :p
It is a good story by the way. Pokemon fan fics can be taken any way truly. Not all of them can or should be lighter stories. They can be in depth with actual character development (unlike the anime >_>.). So keep that in mind.
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