Hi everyone I was bored so I wrote a prolouge of my story, roommates, Its about me and my friends trying to survive the 4 years of collage. Read The prolouge and tell me if I should write more....
Room Mates Prolouge
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One summer day, Everyone one was registering for collage, I saw Marcos, Corey, Isaac, JCPenny, and dasiy were all walking in to the enterance, The line was shortening out.
" What's up everyone! " I yelled.
" Yo! " Corey threw a football at me, I caught it.
" You all registering? " Isaac asked as I passed the ball to him.
" I most certainly am! " JCPenny said.
" Heck yea I am, I wanna know what collage is like... " Dasiy said
" Probaly scary.... " Said Marcos shuddering
" Yep, Im next in line, Time to register! " Corey yelled as he went up to the table to register.
" Next! " Yelled a lady in the side table
" Thats me! " I said as I went to register, everyone waited and soon, We were heading to the two big black Trailers.
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Chapter 1 On The Road!
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" Lets get in the trailers and get ready to go! We'll Split everyone in groups " Marcos said.
" Jeremy, you driving the trailer with....... " Marcos was interruped by Isaac.
" I wanna ride with Jeremy! " Isaac yelled.
" Me too! " Corey yelled.
Marcos Sighed.
" Well, I guess I have to stick with chunky JCPenny..... And Nagging Dasiy.... " Marcos said.
" Hey!! " JCpenny and Dasiy yelled.
" Heres the Walki Talki ( WT ) use it... " Marcos said as he haned me one.
We all entered the trailers, Corey, Isaac, And I had a big trailer, It had A big TV to your right, with a sofa In front of it, A big bedroom at the end of it, The front had a 12" inch GPS System, One big seat, Almost like a School bus, And I big restroom, Marcos and His trailer were all small or course, small TV, small Couch 5" GPS, small bedroom, and a very small bathroom with no door.....
Marcos took off first, I followed Behind him.
After a few minutes of leaving the High school, It was straight on wilderness, All trees, And a very small trail to drive on, Everyone was getting cranky...
" Man, where is my PSP!? " Corey demanded.
" I dont know! " Isaac yelled eating chips.
" Well Isaac, If you can Get your big *****, of the sofa, And quit watching Braney, Maybe you can help him find it!! " I yelled trying to concentrate driving,
" I could But not if there is a spider on the floor! " Isaac responded.
' Kill it! " I yelled.
" You! "
' I'm Driving! Call the Spider fairy! "
I look back, Not keeping my hands on the wheel, " Dude, Kill the freaking spi..... " I said.. * Boom!!!! * Went the trailer as it crashed.
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Chaper 2 The Wildrness
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Marcos's trailer stopped, all of us got out of our trailers. Marcos seemed pretty PO'd
" What did you do to my trailer jeremy? " Marcos asked angry.
" Smooth jeremy, Real smooth " Dasiy said
" Uh, maybe the engine is..... Over heated... " I said as I Lifted the smashed hood in front of the car.
Steam came flying out of the car I coughed loudly.
" Thats Real overheated to me " Corey said.
" Well, Now what? " JCpenny asked.
" Uh, we are going to have to..... " Isaac said but was interrupted by the sound of an engine.
Marcos's trailer was being driven away by some dude.
" ####ers! " He yelled as he threw a cigar out of the car, still on fire It landed on the grass, sparks flew in the air as the redwood tree near them set on fire and started a mini forest fire.
We all walked away.
" So now what? " I said walking past a anthill, I could see my breath in the air.
" Let's just walk all the way out of the woods, we only a few miles till the next gas station " Marcos said.
" We can jack a car there " Corey laughed as we started to walk away.
After about 1 Hour we were getting tired And cranky.
"God, this is the boringest wilderness ever! Thank god it was a short cut! " Marcos yelled.
" Hey, Look at this leaf! It looks dark green " Isaac said as he picked it up and smelled it.
" Isaac, Thats poison Ivy " Corey said.
" Uh, How do you stop it from itching! " He asked.
" Well, Dont tou.... " Dasiy was saying, Isaac Grabbed her arm.
" What is it? " He asked again.
" Touch anyone... " Dasiy finished her sentence.
" Hey! Look! I see a school! " JCpenny shouted!
" Yay! Were out of here! " Marcos yelled.
" Yes!!! " I said.
We ran as fast as we could to the exit of the woods. We crossed some of the highway to the big gates.
" May I see your registation? " Asked the guard.
" Uh, r-r-r registratoin p-p-p-papers? I stuttered.
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Chapter 3 The gates
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" Jeremy? Did you not bring the papers? " Marcos asked.
" I had them In my pocket! " I yelled.
" No papers, No entry. " Said the guard.
" We had the papers, But I don..... " Isaac was interrupted.
" No papers! No entry. " Said the guard.
" I know! " Daisy yelled.
" Listen, JCPenny, you said you didnt wanna have us hold on to yours, do you have yours? " Corey asked.
" No, they were in Marcos's trailer that one guy jacked! " JCPenny replied.
" Ugh! So what are we going to do!? " I said.
" Wait! I found some!! " Marcos said as he took some out of his pocket.
" Uh, one is missing.... " He said.
" Who is it!? " JCPenny asked.
" You.... " Marcos replied.
' What? Why me? " JCPenny asked, shocked.
All of us give the guard our papers one by one but JCPenny.
" You are all clear to go in but you sir.... " Said the guard.
" No! Wait for me guys! Please! " He yelled.
We didn't turn around.
" Guards! Take this person off my fathers property please. " A few more guards come in.
" No please! Im with them! Turn around guys! " JCPenny yelled.
The guards stops us and asks us.
" Do you know this guy? " The guard asked.
" Never seen him before in my lifetime... " I responded as we stood and watched him get dragged away.
" No.... No..... NO!!!!!!!! " JCPenny yelled as he got dragged to the trailers.
" Wow, Im sure going to miss him... " Corey said.
We all look at each other and he looks at us. We burst into laughter. Then we walk twoard the campus office.
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Chapter 4 The campus
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" Man! I love the fresh smell of campus in the morning! " I yelled.
" You mean afternoon? " Corey interrupted.
" Dont start with me... " I warned.
We entered the principals office. It looked very big, I big desk about like 5 feet long, a 32 inch TV, Flowes and more.
" How may I help you? " The principal asked.
" What is your name? " Isaac asked.
" I am prinipal hokuamatuhuohmessaca..... " She said. I bursted out with laughter.
" Huku For short.... " She said.
" Stop laughing!!! " She yelled at me. I sudden;y stoped and looked at her.
" What room are we in? " Daisy asked.
" Dasity, Isaac, And corey you are in dorm 501... " She said.
" No! " Daisy yelled.
" Marcos, Alexia, and jeremy, You are in room 502 " She said as she handed us the key.
" Who is Alexia? " I asked.
" Me. " A girl responded. I turned around and In that second cupid hit me in the A**, I was in love, A girl dressed in a shiney red dress walked in the room.
" Im Alexia.... " She said.
" H-h-h-h-hi.... " I said stunned. We all started walking to the dorms as we left the office.
" I don't wanna be stuck with first-class daisy! " Corey yelled.
" Quit complaining, Its only for the year! " Daisy yelled.
" Yeah, It will feel like the longest year ever now! " Isaac yelled.
" jeremy, Do you like that Alexia chick? " Marcos asked me on our way to our dorm, Alexia was way ahead of us.
" Yeah! She is perfect for me! " I yelled.
" Or, you mean, way out of your leauge! " Marcos yelled.
" Oh shut up! " I yelled. We finally reached our dorm. We caught up to Alexia.
" So, where are you comeing from? " She asked.
" Arizona. " I replied.
" Me too!" She yelled.
" Wow, That is just crazy! " I yelled.
" Well wanna go get a smoothie? " She asked.
" Sure! " I responed. Marcos was all dressed up and leaving.
" Where are you going? " I asked.
" I gotta go meet with Victoria at the sushi place! " Marcos said.
" My cousin, Victoria? " I asked,
" Yea, I gotta go! Bye! " He yelled as he slammed the door.
" Well, Shall we go? " Alexia asked, Taking my hand. I smiled.
" Yeah, Lets go. " I said as we left the dorm.
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Last edited by J.A.R.; 01-25-2009 at 04:21 PM.
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