Rise of the Mushroom Kingdom - The legendary team - Page 2 - Mario Kart Wii

βMC.J.M · 08-02-2009, 02:26 PM

QUOTE:

Originally Posted by Toad Warrior

I'd Definatly buy it if it was a book.

Same! :D

=D

Phantom Toad · 08-02-2009, 02:30 PM

QUOTE:

Originally Posted by C.J.M

Same! :D

=D

Thanks C.J.M

Diableos Auros · 08-02-2009, 02:34 PM

Liking the new chapter.

Typo time. xP.

I was first in line and the miserable Koopa grunt shovelled a big helping of gruel on my plate,

Should be on, not and.

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“If you want to help me form a freedom fighters group, meet me down by the Bowser statue after curfew.”

That should be me, not my. ;P

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Again, I'm not going to look for loads of errors, but if I see any that really catch my attention, I'll let you know.

Phantom Toad · 08-02-2009, 02:43 PM

QUOTE:

Originally Posted by Diableos Auros

Liking the new chapter.

Typo time. xP.

I was first in line and the miserable Koopa grunt shovelled a big helping of gruel on my plate,

Should be on, not and.

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“If you want to help me form a freedom fighters group, meet me down by the Bowser statue after curfew.”

That should be me, not my. ;P

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Again, I'm not going to look for loads of errors, but if I see any that really catch my attention, I'll let you know.

I type so fast that I can never spell very well, I've got to type slower.

Thanks by the way.

Diableos Auros · 08-02-2009, 02:45 PM

QUOTE:

Originally Posted by Phantom Toad

I type so fast that I can never spell very well, I've got to type slower.

Thanks by the way.

I type fast, but did I have many errors? If I did, it was only ever one small one.

Phantom Toad · 08-02-2009, 02:49 PM

QUOTE:

Originally Posted by Diableos Auros

I type fast, but did I have many errors? If I did, it was only ever one small one.

OK, OK, maybe I just suck at grammar.

I also have one question, whens your new fan fiction coming out, I'm very excited about it.

Diableos Auros · 08-02-2009, 02:57 PM

QUOTE:

Originally Posted by Phantom Toad

OK, OK, maybe I just suck at grammar.

I also have one question, whens your new fan fiction coming out, I'm very excited about it.

Well, seeing as this is your thread, I won't talk about to many details, but not for a while as I don't even have a proper name for it yet. ;P

Phantom Toad · 08-02-2009, 02:59 PM

QUOTE:

Originally Posted by Diableos Auros

Well, seeing as this is your thread, I won't talk about to many details, but not for a while as I don't even have a proper name for it yet. ;P

Oh OK, I understand.

*T&T*$RHG$To@d£tt£ · 08-25-2009, 11:48 PM

Nice stuff PT!

I asolutely love them <3 and no joke I normally hate reading because I find it boring but as AGP has pointed out I actually enjoy reading this!

Great Job!

Phantom Toad · 08-25-2009, 11:50 PM

QUOTE:

Originally Posted by $RHG$To@d£tt£

Nice stuff PT!

I asolutely love them <3 and no joke I normally hate reading because I find it boring but as AGP has pointed out I actually enjoy reading this!

Great Job!

Thank you, but no-one is intrested, so I won't bother continuing.

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