Ok, ive been making stories since 5th grade, all of my firneds love them, so i decided to see what you people thing about them, Ill put up one of my stories
so this is my very first story, ( before my other one titled W.A.R. ) it was a story about me and my 3 friends, hope you enjoy!
The Dare
The night air was quiet and still, as three boys sat on their bed ready to play. The boys names were corey, Isacc, Jeremy ( me ). There parents were out of town for the week " Ok, jeremy, truth or dare? " Corey asked me
" Uh dare! " I responded they can see the forest from here " Ok, havent you heard of the zombie that lives in those woods? " corey said " yea, so? " Isacc tries to but in the conversation. " well i dare you and jeremy, to go into the forest, find the zombie and kill it, but beware, it might eat your heart "
" whoah, hold up there partner " i said, " scared " corey taunted, " oh ill make you scared... " I said isacc pulls my fist back " ok well how will you know we killed it?" isacc said " bring back the bones..... " corey said, " your nuts man! " isacc yelled " Fine, we will do it! " I yelled as i dragged isacc out the door.....
I finally dragged him outside, but disaster struck..... " well, you coming? " i asked, " dude, we cant go! " isacc yelled. " Come on, you can do it! " I encouraged him. " Ok fine, but im bringing back the bones " he said. As we walked we got deeper into the pitch black forest, " Dude where are we?" Isacc asked. " dude, does it look like im a tourist or something? " I said . " jeremy, look we are lost, hungry and thirsty! " Isacc said " we got n-n-n- OMG, look! " he yelled, i turned around but before i could answer i heard a groaning sound. " dude," i said " we being punked? " i asked , the zombie was running tward us . " ok, we can do this, Ok i cant do this " isacc said as he went behind a tree
" ready Isacc? " I said He comes out of the tree and gets ready to fight this thing ( Back at the cabin ) " where are they, its 1 am! " corey said as he looks out the window but doesent see anything.... ( at the forest ) punch! " ow jeremy, you hit me " " Sorry its too dark. Isacc hits the zombie them we both hit it and it falls to the ground, isacc grabs a rock and hits the zombie's head so many times his skull cracks." Yea! " isacc yelled as we take the bones and walk to the cabin... ( once we reach the cabin.... ) " guys your back!, god you were gone forever! " corey said, " well yea we kicked some zombie butt! " i said We show corey the bones.... " uh.. this is are tree branches " corey said " too bad for you " corey said " ok, follow me " I said as we left and headed into the forest
" see " isacc said " it was right here " Isacc turnes around and corey was gone he hears a laughing noise . " jeremy " " ok i see wh.... ah! "
The next morning there parents found out they were gone, search and rescue looked in the forest untill they found all 3 hanging from a tree, and holes where there hearts were....
Now it proabaly wanst all great, just leave your comments here
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