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06-16-2008, 09:12 PM
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This is my fan fiction. well not really. more like story. anyway This is made by me and edited by Rino 93. I will post a Table of contents once the chapters get on different pages. I hope you all enjoy! :) Also there might be little edits/whole added section to a chapter. So check often.

Table Of Contents
Prologue~Page 1
Chapter 1: Eterni~Page 1
Chapter 2: Distress~Page 1
Chapter 3: A History Lesson~Page 2
Chapter 4: The Training Begins~Page 3

Mahta, Land Of Might





Prologue
In the great land of Mahta anything is possible. Orcs roaming, Elves hiding, but Humans on the other hand, are always causing trouble. Elves are being raided by Orcs while Humans are wandering in Orc territory. One Elf named Koren is constantly haunted by thoughts in his head, and aims to bring peace…..
once and for all.
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06-16-2008, 09:14 PM
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Chapter 1: Eterni
The sun was rising in the land of Mahta. Koren got off his bed, which looked more like a grassy hammock.

Koren was 17, he lived in an Elven village named Eterni. He was of average height and had long blonde hair, like most elves his age. He wore old hand-me-downs from his father. Naturally they were too big for him, but Koren did not mind that much. He had pointed ears like all other elves. Also he was very skinny and did not have much muscle on him, but could stand his own in a fight and was one of the speedier elves in the village.

Koren grabbed his sword and sheath and went to the courtyard, a gigantic circular area with the Grand Tree in the middle.

Eterni was a village based on a circle. It was built this way to make it look smaller and more compact. Stores were placed around the Grand Tree in a circular fashion. There was also the houses, hidden in the branches of trees as to improve camouflage. The dense forest was supposedly hiding the elves. At this time many houses were ravaged due to the recent attacks.
None had been killed but there were many in the top section of the Grand Tree getting medical assistance. After a quick look around he walked to the Grand Tree.

He walked inside seeing the big finely carved table in front of him. Above the table were candles hanging from the ceiling, along with torches on the side.

Normally, when he woke there were thousands of people eating. He knew it must be early yet.

At the end of the table he saw two people. He walked over.
When he got there he noticed that they were his parents, Ken and Marie. He sat down next to them.

"Why are you up so early?" Asked Ken, his father.

"Nightmares; couldn’t sleep." Said Koren, knowing he had partially lied.

"Are you alright?" Asked his mother, Marie.

"I'm fine, don't worry," Koren said.

“Last night was a little more than nightmares. My head was hurting like never before, and
my dreams were constantly interrupted by a voice.”
Koren thought.

Soon the rest of the elves flooded in. The chefs came out with the food, brilliantly prepared as always.
A plate was put down in front of Koren. Full of non-meat products. Milk was offered, being the only drink besides water which Koren never liked. The rest were fruits and vegetables.

"Eat Up!" Said a chef with a smile on his face.

Soon the other elves were digging into their fruits and vegetables.
Koren looked down at the food. Not feeling hungry he quietly left unnoticed. Very rare occurrence Elves have very acute hearing.
He walked to the courtyard where young elves normally play, and sat down.

“I can't keep skipping meals or I will never grow strong,” Koren thought to himself.

Koren lied down and slowly closed his eyes.

Koren woke up in a land of mountains, darkness everywhere, he saw that houses were made out of some material of rock, that had no order or alignment whatsoever.
Two big green creatures at least twice his size walked out of a house. He could not tell the gender of either but assumed that the foul beasts were both males.
Both spoke at the exact same time,

"Kor...en....We have been waiting for you..."


Koren woke up, shocked at what he had heard. Just then a loud crash came from the Grand Tree.
The Orcs were attacking for the third time this week.
 
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06-16-2008, 09:17 PM
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Chapter 2: Distress
Koren unsheathed his sword, and quickly ran to the Grand Tree. The closer he got the more screams he heard, the more swords clanging. When he arrived he quickly noticed this was a bigger raid than before, at least fifty orcs in this raid aside from the usual twenty.

Koren quickly jumped into the air and slit the throat of one of the orcs. Another orc came from behind with an axe that must have weighed a hundred pounds. The atrocious monster attacked with the axe. The attack was slow and easy to dodge for the swift elf. Koren then had his chance to attack, but made a fatal flaw. He did not notice that another orc was coming from the right of him. Koren stabbed his sword in the stomach of the orc. He did not have enough muscle to pull the sword out. The other orc that was coming from the side had a club in his hand, and swung the club at Koren, almost knocking him unconscious. Being dizzy he slowly looked up at the massive orc. And suddenly a huge wind came and knocked the orc into a tree. Koren, thinking he was in a dream, fell backwards. And was slowly becoming unconscious. Then all the noise stopped. Suddenly only one voice… was heard.

Koren, your race will soon see much bloodshed. Three worlds will collide, and might will triumph. Your ancestors have seen your fate, and the Thrios will save the land of Mahta. Koren, your mind may be greater than you think.

Koren woke slowly. He heard voices coming from the room.

“He will surly die from hunger if he is not awakened,” a voice said.

“He will awake, don’t worry nurse,” another voice said. This one sounding familiar in some way.

Koren knew he was in the upper segment of the Grand Tree. He sat up before feeling the medicine on his body.

“Oh, your awake,” a nurse said.

“Did we win the battle?” Koren said.

“Yes, but more were injured than before, you being the worst” the nurse said.

“What happened?” Koren said.

“You were knocked to the ground after a wind came up, everyone was worried you might be dead,” the nurse spoke with a fear in her voice.

“Who was that in the room?” Koren asked.

“That was your father, Ken,” the nurse said sounding normal again.

“Oh, I see.” Koren said noticing his voice was starting to go away.

“Koren,” the nurse said sounding fearful again.

“Y…e…s….ma’am?” Koren said, barely able to speak.

“You should rest, the medicine on your body are herbs picked from the forest. You should be glad your alive.”

Koren lied back down, feeling no pain at all, and knew they must have given him some pain reliever. He started to think about his dream,

Koren, your race will soon see much bloodshed. Three worlds will collide, and might will triumph. Your ancestors have seen your fate, and the Thrios will save the land of Mahta. Koren, your mind may be greater than you think……he reapeated over and over again in his mind. How does this voice know my name? My race will see blood shed? Three worlds collide? Could this mean there is another race besides Orcs and Elves? And what is the Thrios? Whatever they are how could the save the whole land from this bloodshed?

After thinking this, he noticed that he was very hungry. Before he could do anything he fell back asleep. The voice came to him again.

All will be revealed Koren, in time…all will be revealed.
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06-16-2008, 09:19 PM
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This is nice.Great job jikek!
 
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06-16-2008, 09:20 PM
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This is nice.Great job jikek!
have any idea for the 2nd chapters name?
 
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06-16-2008, 09:23 PM
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um...its not really right for me to recommend.Its your work.
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06-16-2008, 09:25 PM
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o well o and BTW im entering this in the contest. but put me and Rino 93's name in there. Also i wish more people would read.
 
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06-16-2008, 09:28 PM
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In a week i'll take whats done and read it then-and i'll credit you both.
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06-16-2008, 09:30 PM
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i bet u dont know what Mahta means! (yes it has a meaning thats y i chose it) Its one of those things where readers have to try and figure it out by reading the story.
 
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