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Could Be A Novel if Finished 3 42.86%
Could Be A Movie If Finished 0 0%
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Old 06-09-2009   #1 (permalink)
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Default I Found A Weird Story....

Okay I was surfing the Web when i came across a weird story,i found the plot and half of the story,heres the plot and the story,

PLOT:
The Year is 2047 and the Saiyans and all other humans were living peacefully,as everyone knows the saiyan race has grown and the evil saiyans were now called "Badamas" (Stupid Name But I Didnt Make it!) and every century a new chosen one know as the "Adama" (Loved that part cuz it sounds like my name!) comes and destroys all evil and put the world at peace (you could tell he watched avatar) and so now begins our story....

Now The Story Was Split In Half Or A Maybe 1/4 I Dont Know Who Made it But I Liked it Kinda

THE STORY:

Our Story begins In The Pacific,As Zakehumah And His Parents Were Resting on the cruise liner,a shadowy figure began too emerge from the water Zakehumah Was terrified,"Kah'Me'Kah'Meh'Haa!!!!" Yelled Zakehuma's Father As He Blasted The Legendary Saiyan Laser At The Black! Zakehumah Still In Shock Stumbled To The Side And Fell Overboard! there he lay unconscious ,floating toward a desert isle (Gilligans Island Sequence..) Than There He Lay "Zakehumah" on the isle,no one too be seen,he got up and said "Aha,Where Am I? Am I On The Liner Still?,*Notices Surroundings* Oh No! I'm On A Island! Well As Long as i am here i might as well look around" as Zakehumah walked he stumble on too a old building that didnt look touched in ages, "well this is convenient,i found a house" as Zakehumah walked inside a young boy sprang from the roof whilehanging on too what looked like a vine,"Hey! My names Elkala! im a saiyan you know!" "nice too meet you" said Zakehumah, "whats ya name kid? said a rather old man, "um i i don't really know,the only thing i remember is falling,but whats your name? "windy,but you can call me boss" "okay "Boss"*chuckling under his breath" "well let me take your temperature kid,ill tell you if your under some kind of sickness or have amnesia" stepping over too the scanner,zakehumah got on,as he looked windy was suprised! "Why kid If You Didnt Know Yo
And Thats Where It Cut Off,I Thought He Might Of Said "Why Kid If Yu Didnt Know,Your The Adama!" but thats my suggestion...
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Old 06-09-2009   #3 (permalink)
It's been a great ride.
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It might make a decent book if the story is finished somehow.
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Old 06-09-2009   #4 (permalink)
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Well I Guess Ill Finish IT...
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Ill Make A Thread For This Story When I Get Some More Opinions
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Old 06-09-2009   #6 (permalink)
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I have something to say...wrong forum, there is something called fan fiction for this
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Old 06-10-2009   #7 (permalink)
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Yes indeed, this goes in the fan fiction subforum.

I'll move it.
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and I am not going to delete my post adam, its not spam -.-
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Old 06-10-2009   #9 (permalink)
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arent you just mashing a bunch of things together and trying to claim an orginal story? 0_O

and the bit about falling over and losing memory is old and boring, plus the conversation bit was horrible
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Old 06-10-2009   #10 (permalink)
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It seems like you wrote this, but are saying someone else did in case anyone thinks it sucks. Which it does.
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