This is a real life story,but with fake characters,it's events take place 4 years and 1 day ago,It takes place during Hurricane Ivan,the strongest hurricane too hit Golf Shores,Alabama,It is a 3 Chapter .

September 15,2005,"The Hurricane news were everywhere,somewhat a lot of traffic in my neighborhood,too much at least..",thought Mark,even though he wasn't evacuating,he still wanted too,and he still,too,was scared as much as everyone else.
3 Hours and 37 Minutes Later
"MOM! We really need to evacuate!,This Hurricane will be bad!!!" said Mark while looking at the weather,"No It wont,were safe in our house...." replied Mark's Mom eagerly,Mark looked out the window at the dark,gloomy clouds..."Ugh,this is getting us no where! We will be killed!" replied Mark in strange tone,"If you keep saying "Kill" you are getting sent too your room young man!","Im 14 for God's sake,you know what,P*ss Off!" said Mark,"What Did You Just Say?" yelled his mom,Mark,saddended ran off ,out of the house,into the woods,up the horse,and too the ocean.
"They just don't understand.." said Mark,looking into the dark,dark,ocean,"The wind's are picking up....better get back" said Mark,Whoooooooooooo said the Hurricane Warnings,"Wow took'em that long too put up a dang red flag!?","What's that noise?" 'Looks Up',above Mark were the clouds,doing just what you think.....

to be continued......

No literally,only post if you wanna opinionize,not talking about grammar or me or anything,thats the ultimate challenge that I bet you guys cant beat.
Only say things like,this is good or this is bad,or how too make it better,it must not be about me or grammar,even though grammar is making it better,I don't really give a crap,can you post without doing that? Doubt it....

verry good :D

Thank you,next up..oh...it must be the critisizers....yup,doing they're job for humanity...

All I can say is that your main character is really stupid. He verbally assaults his mother for a stupid reason, then runs out into a hurricane directly after complaining about being unable to evacuate from said hurricane.

Why did the main charactor run outside into the hurricane and not to his room? And shouldn't he just leave without her and let her get killed?

Ahh...just too make it stupid,like me,notice how i put "up the horse"

...W-what?

Read it and then saw the sig.

btw good story

Not Bad.