This is something I came up with,this first post is going to include what chapters are done.
ALSO-Most my friends on this forum will have a role.

Also,a lot of credit goes to Natbong00 for reading through most of the junk I make and correcting it.I KNOW THE PROLOUGE IS SHORT.I couldnt fit the whole chapter on so I turned some of it into a prolouge,I hope you enjoy it

Chapter One-Done

Prolouge

It started as an ordinary day.
The sea battered the pier as Jordan ran down, foam flying in his face. Robin ran behind him, laughing with the wind blowing her blond hair behind her. The two had been skipping the morning of High School to muck around at the arcade.

Suddenly, Robin stopped.

"J, can you hear that?"

Jordan turned around and quizzed "Hum no… Hear what?"

"It sounds like a dolphins cry" Robin shook her head, and quickly rushed in with. "Actually, forget it. We're late."

They continued down the pier and walked over to the road, the sound of waves smashing against the rocks, marking their presence and setting a familiar mood for the two.

"There it is again; a dolphin’s cry... But it sounds strange. J, can you come with me? It’s coming from this way…" Robin turned left instead of right, and headed along the sea wall.
The surf splashed into their eyes, forcing Robin to pause, to listen and search for the vague noise. She finally turned around and headed onto the beach. The wind blew her long hair back, and Jordan was reminded of why he fell in love with her.
Her elegance shone, as she turned to the cliff and broke into a gentle jog. Jordan finally stopped staring, and ran after her.
The wind blew a large clump of sand at his face, and when he brushed it away he'd lost sight of her. He ran over to the cliff, and looking around, he noticed a small cave.
The sky clapped, and thunder struck the beach. He crawled into the small opening of the cave, an instant feeling of pleasure stroke him as he realized how large it was.

lol nice prolouge but i knew it would have jordzz and hooktail

Stay with this people, this is gonna turn out to be great.

And sh*t TR beat me to the first post lol x'(

Chapter One
He climbed to his feet, and called out.

"R? You there?" He took a few steps forward in the dark mist of the cave, and upon hearing a noise, he jumped, spun to the side and shouted:
"Robin, this isn’t funny anymore." He took another step forwards, and jumped into the air, as a candle lit up in front of him, revealing a small table with a dusty book on it.
He looked down at the book; the title was in a language he could not understand.
He leant down, and opened it. The pages were empty, with one word written in it.

End.

He turned through all the pages, reaching the back page, where he noticed some writing.

“He, who casts a glance upon this content, shall be thy savior.”

The pages flapped back to the front, and the book slammed shut, with a bright light coming out of it. The light rose up and engulfed the cave, now allowing Jordan to see how broad it actually was. Then, it became too bright to see. Colours swirled past him, like a neon display, and he reached out, and his hand changed colours.

Jordan opened his eyes, and stared up at the sun. Its rays beat down, and as he pulled himself into a kneeling position, he saw he was now in the center of the desert.
"Crap..."

He stared up into a pair of massive, looming eyes beaming down at him. He slowed edged away, shifting his wait on the sand, not getting up to his feet, staring into a seemingly beast. Their looks crossed. The beastly creature raised a paw, and swiped through the air. He thrust himself onto the sand, so he was lying on his back, staring up at the sun.
The beast then raised another paw and snarled at Jordan. He looked up at it and tried to shuffle away from the incoming danger.
Then, a loud noise came from behind it, and the beast squealed in pain.

Two men stood behind the fallen creature, one of them carrying a small mechanical object, looking like a primitive gun, the other carrying a roped net and a large stick. They looked down at the beast, which had collapsed onto the floor, and one of them spoke in a strange language, thrusting the stick at Jordan. Before he knew what was happening, the first man raised his weapon and fired.

The next thing Jordan knew, was he was in a lot of pain. He cracked open his eyes, and he was in a small net. He tilted his head, and he saw the man with the gun type thing was dragging the net, taking care to bang it on every rock. Jordan tried to reach out of the net, but there was a sizzling noise and a small burst of thunder struck his hand. The second man had turned around and started shouting. Jordan didn’t need to know this language to know they were swearing at him, and telling him to behave.
The second person raised his stick, and thrust it at him, and mimed silence.

A few hours passed in his mind, all he could see was endless deserts.
A loud noise came from behind him, and he jumped as far as the net would allow him. Another noise came, and it sounded like a fierce blast of water, and the two men felt the desert sands, drenched. A newcomer was behind them, another teenager, around Jordan’s age was standing there, his arm raised. He looked down at Jordan and ran over to him.

“Are you alright?”

“Hungry...”As Jordan fell to the sandy floor.

Jordan smelt something delectable. It smelt like pasta, the kind he had back wherever he came from.
Earth, he guessed. He remembered everything that had happened to him, right up to the point he was now, lying somewhere comfy. He didn’t want to open his eyes, however, when someone spoke softly, he did.

"Xst,trc gqwblxp?"

"Wha?" Jordan managed to gasp.

"Sorry, I assumed you spoke our language. My name is Rom."

"Rom? Not something I hear everyday."

"It’s short, for I have another name, but you call me this. See, I just saved you, and you thank me by saying your hungry?"

As he looked around, he saw his surroundings. He was lying in a small, wooden room, and someone had placed him in a bed. They had also dressed him like everyone, in white clothes, and someone had set a thing which looked like a sword on top of the pile of clothes beside his bed.

"Sorry buddy. I haven’t eaten in ages…"
Rom shoved a bowl, with painted patterns full of pasta towards him.

"Eat up.”
“FCAN!" He yelled out. Rom was looking at Jordan’s jacket, which was the one he had when he opened that book. It flashed white, and something was deposited inside. Rom carefully reached out to it, and pulled a small book out.

"You didn’t strike me as the person to keep a Journal.”

Rom opened it onto the first page, and it filled the room with a crimson glow, and words echoed onto the empty pages.
He threw the journal to the floor, and backed away. He pointed at it, took a deep breath, an intrigued expression now owning his face.

"Who are you?"

The hero of light arrived in the indifferent world, and with him, he encountered his bonded fusion. Clad in light robes, his magics will harmlessly guide the hero, armed with the sword of the goddess.

lolz its funny that jordzz and hooky are in again
how did i know
anyway nice start

Yea well the fact there are forum members is not something you should frown upon. It just makes it easier to relate to and give a better read.

FTW with this story btw.

I Hope I'm In It :). I'm a Guy So Don't Say I'm a Girl Lol.

QUOTE:

Originally Posted by Natbong00 Yea well the fact there are forum members is not something you should frown upon. It just makes it easier to relate to and give a better read. FTW with this story btw.

Yeh,really its the best way to get people to read it They like seeing themselves,but as I said the people I know and like more get more roles,so Jordzz and Hooky are first.

BTW Great Story. I Just hope I'm In it :)

yeh i suppose it makes more sense for them to be in