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07-22-2008, 07:17 AM
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So I have had this story written for some time thought I should share it and hear what other people think about it. I know it my sound weird but hey it's just I keep adding and taking things off. Please comment and I could also add people if they want I don't mind I actually need new characters and bosses.

CHAPTER 1


Water was rising fast it reached my ankles. Looking at the beach seeing my family there just standing there looking at the big waves coming their way. I quickly jumped down and saw their face with the expression of horror. Coach Johnson ran to us yelling to get to the upper level. I just stood there and looked at the direction my family was looking. It was an awful sight the water was black but there was no stench it smelled like the beach.

I saw from a distance some sort of wave forming. I quickly looked at the coach and asked him what was going on but his face was the same as my family. I kept yelling his name but no response it looked like he was a statue. It looked like I had no choice so I punched him on the stomach hard. "What the oh God why, what huh oh thanks Ruizu", said the coach trying to regain normality. I just looked at him and said, " What's going on? What's the deal with the black water?" I then pointed at the beach. " I, I.............. I don't know but what's wrong with them?", he said looking at my family. I turned to face my family and answered him without looking at him. " I don't know but you were the same a moment ago." I turned and looked at him with a serious expression " So mind telling me whats really going on I know you know I'm not stupid." He just looked at me and started shaking " THE DARK WATER."

I was about to say something but I heard the rush of water getting closer. I quickly turned to face the beach but saw a huge wave coming closer. There was no time for me to get to safety so I quickly covered my face with my arms. A second later all I felt was an earthquake which made fall down. I looked in front of in shock to see piles of mud blocking entrance to the ocean and the exit to the beach.
 
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