This blog is essentially for the same reason as my previous story sample blog here
I just now threw together another 'teaser' for my story, and I would love any feedback and possibly criticism on this.
Ruthless. Utterly ruthless. It was devastating. How could we have been defeated so easily? We were prepared for the worst and willing to fight until the end, but even that wasn't enough. Where did we go wrong? Why did it have to happen this way? I...