It seems like the only way you get noticed around these parts is either do a Role Playing thread (which isn't a piece of literature but a game, so shouldn't be allowed here), or Mario characters.

FFS, I have tried before with more abstract chars and look what happened, down the f***ing sewers.

I honestly don't care if people hate, or love, in fact I just want them to be honest and give some feedback. Because I want to improve and hopefully do more, but without comments, I can't go anywhere.

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Anyways, thanks (and this was obviously not directed at you too).

Besides this story could live without the Mario names, it's just to entertain the masses.