Nice third chapter. :)


Btw, good luck finishing the story! I always have a hard time writing long stories because either I forget what I was aiming for, or I just lose interest in the whole thing... but I've recently tried writing notes for myself too, that way I can plan what I want to do and not important forget stuff...

It doesn't look too good when you write something into a story, but then it suddenly loses all its importance and is totally forgotten about in the end.