Hm, that was a great chapter. I love how you write, the story flows so easily. I like the suspicions you've played against people, they work well with the character's personalities. Good job, I simply cannot wait for the next chapter!
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Originally Posted by Diableos Auros
Actually, about half of the characters in the story have some sort of white hair on their bodies, but you forgot one thing; the hair is white AND fluffy.
Maybe you should have a look at some pictures of Sonic characters to see who has white and fluffy hair on their bodies. Yes, Silver does, I think Storm does too, but what about Shadow? 
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Oh yeah, Shadow has the white tuft of hair, doesn't he?
